Improving Secondary School Education for Students with Low Levels of Education: A Study of Student Perspectives

This entire document needs to be edited, please check and edit accordingly to the comments of the teacher. Please insert necessary responses for 15 students and data to show and remember that these students are in secondary school but their level of education is very very low. And change the document to the past tense and use indet citation where necessary 
Lecturer’s comment;
1. Your research has no “quotes”, meaning that every sentence in it is “yours” and not taken from any author
2. How could I verify that your data are really what students responded to your questions once you did not annex responses from them?
3. You did not interview all of them. Where is your sample? How did ou create it? How many ????
4. You have a lot of contrasting colors (yellow, green, red, blue, gray..)and you decided to choose 3 green … and I have open big my eyes to see the 3 different grenn.
5. Last question. Is this your final document? If yes, it will only be marked after receiving all the remaining