complete revisions for this essay using the instructors comments and the assumption details.
Delete your instructors comments and those of your classmates.
Rename your file, including Revision or Final in the new file name.
Highlight any major changes that you have made; focus on overall sentences, paragraphs, or sections that you have extensively revised. Your instructor may also ask you to include comments that track the revisions you have made.
Provide an overall revision statement, either as a separate file or in the assignment comment box. Your revision statement should show awareness of the higher-order criteria (purpose/focus, development, organization) and list the major revisions you made; whenever possible, explain how your revisions have allowed you to better meet the purposes of your draft and better meet the needs and expectations of your audience. You will be expected to do more than show your ability to edit and proofread for simple typos, grammatical accuracy, and spelling mistakes.
